Seeing is Believing in #HDH bloghop

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1. Ciaran Dwynvil | February 13, 2013 at 6:37 AM

   Oh, I enjoyed this snippet so much. It could have been longer I could read on and on.

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 8:19 AM

     It’s quite an interesting conversation, lol, very eye-opening for Sean I need to finish writing this scene and then you can read all of it.

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2. meryvamp | February 13, 2013 at 7:09 AM

   Very interesting. I’d love to know exactly what Teddy saw in all those visions of Sean XD

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 8:22 AM

     Well, I can tell you it wasn’t anything naughty Teddy needed to both see and believe in the visions, so they didn’t show him anything… compromising.

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3. spookymrsgreen | February 13, 2013 at 9:19 AM

   Ha ha, I liked it, very intriguing. I’m hooked!

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 5:21 PM

     I’m glad it intrigued you, lol.

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4. Sarah Cass | February 13, 2013 at 2:10 PM

   Very intriguing! A first meeting for one of them…not so much the other. Well done. I want to know a lot more.

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 5:28 PM

     You’re right about the meeting…I guess it would be more accurate to say it was the first time they meet in real life rather than in visions. I’m glad it caught your attention.

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5. Alexandra Anthony | February 13, 2013 at 3:49 PM

   Wonderful hook…I love the conversation!

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 5:29 PM

     Thanks, Alexandra. I love writing dialogue for my boys, it’s always a lot of fun.

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6. Lacie Nation | February 13, 2013 at 4:07 PM

   Great job! I’m hooked.

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 5:30 PM

     Then my work here is done, lol. Glad you liked it.

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7. Sabrina Devonshire | February 13, 2013 at 4:14 PM

   It definitely wasn’t too long. Great description and fun dialogue. I want to see more

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 5:33 PM

     I’m glad it wasn’t too long…I was worried, lol. Writing dialogue for my boys is always a lot of fun for me. I think I’ll use more of this scene for my post on Saturday Seductive Studs, in case you wanted to read more.

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8. Flossie Benton Rogers | February 13, 2013 at 4:26 PM

   Wow, he’s been seeing Sean for 20 years– remarkable. They will surely mean something to each other. I want to know about this ability and how it has changed his life. He must have more of an idea of where his life is heading than most people.

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 6:13 PM

     There is so much more to their story. Teddy has an amazing ability, but he doesn’t use it to see his own life. He considers that cheating, lol. I think I’ll use more of this scene for my Saturday Seductive Studs post this weekend if you want to read more about these two. Thanks for a great comment!

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9. Lucy Felthouse | February 13, 2013 at 4:59 PM

   Great hook – intriguing!

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   • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 6:05 PM

     I’m glad you think so, Lucy. Thanks for commenting.

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10. Jessica Subject | February 13, 2013 at 5:00 PM

    Hmm, that’s a long time to be “seeing” him, and yet have never met him. Interesting hook!

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    • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 6:06 PM

      Well, they haven’t had many opportunities to run into one another, being from different worlds. But don’t worry…they will make up for lost time.

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11. gayleramage | February 13, 2013 at 5:53 PM

    Ooh, very intriguing!

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    • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 6:17 PM

      Thanks! Glad you think so.

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12. Julez S Morbius | February 13, 2013 at 9:17 PM

    excellently written

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    • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 10:13 PM

      Thank you very much! I appreciate you saying so.

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13. Elin Gregory | February 13, 2013 at 10:17 PM

    This looks a very interesting world. Sean doesn’t seem at all surprised to hear that Teddy is a seer. Nice snippet. [Don't worry about the length. It's more important that it make sense than it be short].

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    • JadeCrystal | February 13, 2013 at 10:37 PM

      It’s New York City, but my boys live in the neighborhoods where preternatural is normal. A seer is one of the most “normal” things that Sean has encountered lately, lol. I agree with you. I would rather it make sense than worry about length, but I also want to be mindful of people’s time so they can visit as many hookers as they can.

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14. chantalhalpin | February 14, 2013 at 3:56 PM

    It must be quiteexhilarating to finally meet him!

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    • JadeCrystal | February 14, 2013 at 3:59 PM

      Teddy is a pretty laid-back guy so it’s hard to tell, but he’s very excited, lol. Sean is too, but for a different reason…he thinks Teddy is hot.

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