Posted on January 9, 2013, in Chroma, Hump Day Hook, Novel in Progress, Story Teasers and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. Oh yes! Great hook! That’s the way to startle me just when he is daydreaming and woolgathering.

  2. Oh, such a harsh wake-up from thoughts about Toby’s lover.

    You tease, I want to know more :) Your boys simply have a way to snatch my attention every time, the very first moment we meet. I hope Toby will find a way from his current predicament soon.

  3. Oh wow, that was brilliant! Just when I was lulled into a false sense of security… I’m hooked!

  4. Jessica Subject

    Wow, such a sweet excerpt, and then BAM! Great hook!

  5. Great hook! Such a tease.

  6. Oh my…such wonderful thoughts marred by the darn sneak attack!! Great hook :)

  7. What a wonderful description and emotion only to so rudely awakened! Great hook.

  8. Kathleen Grieve

    Uh oh! Now what? I’m hooked!

  9. I am so jealous of those of you who have such great imaginations that you can create these other worlds!

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